Does Your Homeschooler's Writing Make the Grade? Create a Writing Rubric to Evaluate Writing Lessons

Your student just handed you a neatly writtenask them to read it again before they submit
paper that you had assigned. Terrific. Now, howtheir paper. Better yet, have them grade
do you go about assigning a fair and objectivethemselves on each of the criteria. It will usually
grade? Just as important, is it possible to use thespark some self-editing.
grade as a teaching tool for students to improveStep Five: Before grading it, read the paper
their writing?through yourself one time.
Here are seven steps to evaluating and gradingYou have to fight that urge to grab the red pen
written assignments that will make the task moreand start circling errors. The most important thing
rewarding and productive.is the content, so focus first on the content. Read
Step One: Decide how and if you will grade theit, ignore the obvious errors (I know that's hard)
assignment.and then ask yourself: what was he or she
This may seem too obvious a step, but beforecommunicating with this paper?
rushing to the next step stop and think. We wantThe first time through the only thing that counts
our students to write well, which takes lots ofis the meaning of the paper and the organization
practice. That means lots of writing assignments.of ideas. Did it make sense? Was it organized? If
If each and every one is going to require a gradeyes, go on to the next step.
on a 100 point scale than your student may notIf the paper is not organized, give the paper back
have time for anything else but writing. On theto the student to re-do. A poorly organized paper
other hand, you don't want students to startcannot succeed in communicating anything. If
handing in sloppy, poorly done work because theyorganizing is a weak point of your students, you
know it isn't going to be graded.will need to have writing assignments just to
There will also be times when you have short,practice this skill. Students should begin organizing
simple writing assignments just to practice a skillideas in upper-elementary school. By middle school
or stretch their imagination. Each of thesethey need to have developed some competence
assignments doesn't require a full-grade. But oncein doing so.
again, you want the student to put forth effortThis point cannot be over-emphasized. Usually,
and not get in the habit of producing sub-standardwhen you have papers so poorly written it is hard
work.to grade them, poor organization is the culprit.
A simple solution is to have some assignmentsCollege professors and writing tutors will affirm
that are worth 5 points. This gives the studentthat the lack of this skill results in an inability to
motivation to produce quality writing, without theproduce anything worth reading or grading.
full-scale effort of papers that require roughStep Six: Assign Points
drafts and multiple corrections.Starting with organization, and for each of the
For those papers that should require planning,other criteria on your evaluation tool, you need to
writing, and proof-reading; you will want anassign up to ten points. Here is the scale I use:
objective tool for evaluation and grading.* 9 Points - "B" The criteria was met. For
Step Two: Consider how much weight should beorganization, that means the outline was logically
given to mechanics?organized.
For a fully graded paper, mechanics often counts* 8 Points - "C" The criteria was almost met, but
for twenty to fifty percent of the grade. As athere is room for improvement. Here is your
whole, I usually count mechanics as 30% of theteaching moment. What would they need to do to
grade but there is no rule that others have toget a B?
follow this. Some college writing courses may* 7 Points - "D" The criteria was not met and the
count mechanics as 50%, so it may not hurt towriting is not up to the level expected.
weigh it as heavily a few times when grading* 6 Points - "F" The student failed to incorporate
papers of your college-bound highschooler.that criteria at all. (In rare cases, such as not
Again, on some of the shorter papers that do notincluding a bibliography when one is on the list, I
get a full-grade, I may not down-grade formight give a 0. However, I seldom give less than
mechanics per se. These papers are helpful forsix points, as a 60% is an F grade.)
noting weak areas that need additional help. These* 10 Points - "A" The student not only met the
shorter papers also give me the criteria I maycriteria, he or she excelled. You can take a yellow
incorporate in the full-graded papers describedhighlighter and highlight something in the paper that
below.is a great example of exceeding the standard.
Step Three: Create Your RubricIt might be valuable to reflect on what an
A writing rubric is simply a tool to assess each"average" score is. At one time, average was a
criteria you will grade the student on. You can"C" grade, and instructor's graded on a curve. "B'"s
make your own or use one made by someonewere reserved for student's who truly performed
else. An easy to use strategy is to develop aabove average and "A'"s were rare. That scale
rubric with ten criteria. Here is an example:has changed over the years, so that a "B" today
Grading Criteria:is roughly equivalent to a "C" grade several
- The points are organizeddecades ago.
- An introductory paragraph introduces the topicSome contend that it is appropriate to give a "B"
- Original ideas are presentedgrade as the average, expected grade. After all,
- Paragraph development (includes topic"B" means "good" and don't we want most of our
sentences)students to do good? "B" also means the
- Phrases are clear (avoid awkward or hard torequirement was met, which we also want for
read sentences)the majority of the students.
- Interesting phrases and sentences hold theThe downside of this argument is that we no
readers' attentionlonger have a bell-shaped curve so grades have
- A concluding paragraph summarizes the paperless value for rating student performance. If "B" is
- Complete sentences (no fragments or run-ons)average, we have only one step above average
- Punctuationand three below.
- SpellingThe scale listed above reflects a mid-point
You may notice in the example above that thebetween those two sides of the grading debate.
last three criteria are for mechanics. Again, youA "B" has to be earned by demonstrating that
can give more or less emphasis to this area.they have met the criteria. And a student should
Since there are ten areas, each criteria receivesnot expect an A unless they can specifically
one to ten points which makes scoring on a 100demonstrate that they have gone above what is
point scale very easy. It also lets the studentexpected.
know exactly what they are going to be gradedStep Seven: Assign points for all criteria and add
on.up the score
These ten criteria are not the only ones that canThe first reading of the paper allows the
be used. Consider the weaknesses and problemsinstructor to assess the organization of the paper.
you notice when reading the short assignmentsIt needs to be read several more times for an
and daily writing of the student. Is thereaccurate evaluation. With each additional reading,
something else you should focus on? Otheryou can grade two or three criteria.
criteria I have used include:For mechanics, I use the following scale:
- Thesis statementA - Less than one error per page B - Less than
- Bibliographytwo errors per page C - Less than four errors
- Variety in sentence structureper page D - Less than six errors per page F -
- Use of transitions between paragraphsSix or more errors per page.
- Pictures and tablesDepending on your student, you may need to
- Neatness, professional appearance, use of fontsmodify this scale. If they are currently making lots
- Footnotes or endnotesof mechanical errors, it might be beneficial to
- Level of vocabulary usedgrade more leniently AND spend more time on
- Completed on timewriting mechanics. It can be disheartening to a
Don't get overwhelmed by all the things youstudent to constantly get low grades on their
might include. You can start with the first set ofcreative writing due to mechanics. Rather than
criteria listed above and change it as you seemake them feel like quality writing is out of their
your needs changing.reach, consider using or developing writing
Step Four: Give them the list of criteria when theassignments that practice the skill(s) they are
assignment is given.deficient in.
The first time you use this, you might want toFinally, add up all of the points. Viola, it will give
ask them to read it out loud to you. Theyour student an objective measurement of their
tendency of a student is to jump in without agrade. It also gives them a road map to show
clear sense of direction. For those that need athem what they need to do to improve their
little extra practice following directions, you maywriting.